Nutty

oh... how true. I can spend an hour on a couple of paragraphs. The words just don't come out right! Very nice. I can't write poems... they deteriorate into stories ...

Meanwhile, back at the village... "I'm sorry Pinkle." Flin sighed and gave him a shadow of his normal grin. "I'm sick of being cast aside. I'm sure you would know ...

Flin stared after Eliane, his good humor somewhat rumpled. "Cant take a joke, that one." Flin turned around to see that the other two where heading away. "Oi! what about ...

I like it, and want to read more. But remember to keep sentences short when dealing with action-filled scenes. And chapters can be any length in my opinion lol. I ...

The dark figure sat in the shadows for a while longer, staring after Ryn. "Idiot." With this he stood to his full six feet and turned up the lamp. He ...

good description, Just watch your emphasis and comma use. Interesting... I'll keep an eye out for more :wink:

Flin turned to Galina. "You must let me come! I'm a fair fighter, and I'll help 'raise funds...' for a cut of the loot, of course." Flin gave Galina his ...

Flin trotted down the road, searching for something to do. "Oi! Errol!" he called, and dashed up to meet the disgruntled gryphon. Errol sighed and turned around. "What is it ...

(Halflings have a different personality to hobbits, love anything of value, charismatic, mischievous and adventurous. Think D&D style. I'm changing the scene cuz I was one minute late ...) Flin ...

handsome... not hansome.

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I want to join! name: Flin Fleetfoot Race: halfling age: 25 (equal to 16 human years) Gender: male Clothing: soft leather shoes, well-fitting leathers. Appearance: dark brown hair, innocent expression

elvin maiden... this is the first version. It is now called 'tamia's quest.' That version has been edited more. A lot of the phrasing is different, I'm trying to get ...

well, there is some great scenes in LOTR. The plains, I'm pretty sure, I've seen when I go to canterbury. the elven place is a huge set, so all you'll ...

6/10 because I hate kids being killed...