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I love it. No really, I do. You see the life as, indeed, an osprey would see it, if they just didnt think 000000000. I couldn't see any grammar problems, ...

don't let sentences ramble... lol

Liz.... something happy?? :o You know I agree totally. Except my brain can be scary too....

It's great. One thing, If she wants alex to save her, why does she go on about Eolen? and watch the sentence length. Long sentences often need commas to give ...

Carmen Sandiago is the villian in a video game made to help your geography/history...

Flin came to where he left Galina, and stopped. There, there and there. Scuffle marks. They had taken her! Flin ran back to the village, mind blank in panic. Flin ...

guys, I AM carmen sandiago! *Evil laugh* *Flees, and falls off the nearest cliff*

Flin was moving through the trees, moving at a steady trot. "What am I gonna do? I left Galina alone. Galina . The king's going to eat me for breakfast." ...

As Flin ran through the trees, he had called back to the following Galina. "You know, I could just get it meself." Galina didn't reply, so Flin kept talking. "Everyone ...

Flin was looking around the village, but was still startled when he heard a vioce behind him. "Flin! What news?" "Galina! It is terrible! The humans are wearing down our ...

Flin was out hunting, when he saw it all. The bridge was covered in elven troops, but the humans where breaking through. Flin climbed a tree quickly and quietly for ...

ah man.... (sighs) Addicted again...

oh man... now I want to go read ALL of ch..... I'll wait till it's published, shall I? :wink: Well, I'm gonna keep reading anyway...

Werewolves are cool... especially if you want to go more fantasy style. Yeah, I suppose it is scary... but not a whole lot phases me. Well written though. On to ...

Oh man... I love it! Controversy is something that fascinates me, and religious controversy even more so! I don't think it's too gory, I read much worse all the time ...