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Tamia gasped. "You.... You have.... you have a.... tail? "What? This old thing? Dont worry 'bout it love." He gave her a wicked grin. "Just come with me." With that ...

Flin shook pinkle. Pinkle looked up and gasped. Flin relised that he must look a horrible sight. His tunic was covered in blood, and he could feel it drying in ...

Flin had been in the village when the slaughter came. Hundereds of the enemy pored into the village, slaughtering the lookouts and scouts before they could raise the alarm. "Oh... ...

Rasi... Flins the rogue! rogue-thief/trap placer/disarmer/pickpocket/lock-picker, all in one!

Boring??? You have to be joking. Every girls dream... to be selected by the cutest guy in school. Well written, realistic and interesting. Keep posting- I want to know more

Handyman could become engineer-we may need to make a fort or siege weapons at some point. I think there's always room in an army for those who can tell one ...

whoops... thanks griff. *changes spelling*

as often a year as there a centimeters in the length of a piece of string. Why is the platypus?* *Not why it is anything, just why is the platypus?

An upfront, honest and sometimes too blunt guy of late teens. (Don't ask me why...) Tamia

All able bodies that escaped the destruction joined the army, as there was nothing left to go back to. Farmers put down their hoes and rakes and took up swords ...

6/10 Cuz alpaca is a funnier word... Sploosh! (For some reason every time my cousin says it everyone gets the giggles)

6/10... I don't get it.... pavlov?

Jule's idea is good, Well I like it anyway... So, Rasi? It's your storybook. Do you like that idea? If we start again, It will take a while for everyone ...

I liked it... But as always, work on the flow. Try reading it aloud and putting commas where you naturally pause. Great storyline, And he did seem depressed. Have you ...

I agree. we have lots of little plots between all the different characters. Flin with Galina, Galina with Seyla, etc. I'm assuming it's because we all only have one or ...