Nutty

*Tamia looks around, slightly creeped out by all the tragic dancing* "Right... Elyn, what are we doing here??"-Tamia "We're dancin', obviously. Would you care to dance?"-Elyn "Elyn, you're four foot ...

Tamia blundered through the streets, confused. The sound of the town seemed deafening, and movement was everywhere. A man leading a goat pushed past her, anxious to get to the ...

Shyral looked around the confusing throng, wondering what to do. She looked up, and saw Slyten swooping down to her. "Slyten!" She ran to his side. "You're wounded. Are you ...

Lye looked around. "I suppose we shall have to go fetch him now." She lead the group to the prison, surefooted and confident in her way around. She checked the ...

Eryc looked around the room. "You must be the most well protected human in history. I'm here, if you want me. I do not know anyone here, so I cannot ...

Sytri woke to Yessi opening the door. "Here's your meal. Enjoy." She shoved in a human girl, and grinned horribly at them, before closing the door and striding away. Sytri ...

The air was warm, too warm for a winter's night. Bodies pressed around him, looming. Hands contained him, and everything was in flames. Faces, faces of simple, kind men and ...

**hard act to follow, indeed. But someone has to do it... it may as well be I** Shyral looked around the crowd. In this moment, surrounded by strangers, she felt ...

Nutty slumps on the floor, disappointed. "But....But... I would have found him..." Nutty sighs and goes over to check out all the shiny buttons. "What does this do... Okay, okay, ...

nutty lands on the ship. "Whoah, guys. I got lost." They turned and explained about matt and bella. "Right! dragon shape, I think." She runs outside and shapeshifts, ready to ...

Eryc turned, snarling. "That's up to me, and me only. I have a brain. Vampires. Werecats. Always so.. upper class. I have a mind too." Eryc glared, and turned back ...

It's not flimsy! far from it. Good twist- not only has someone died, the family is divided. Very interesting. Well written, I like how you have her so opinionated- it ...

Aha! that is one disturbed girl. I like this, and the way you have the one sided conversation is very effective. It shows the desperation in finding something to trigger ...

Oh! I remember this. It's great, it sounds like the kind of strange nightmare I would have. Well written though could do with better paragraph layout. Right. Next part.

The sun bore down, warming his face. He enjoyed sitting outside, the air fragrant with the scent of early spring flowers, rich soil and animal manure. He closed his eyes, ...