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Close, But No Cigar
**edited. Well, I decided to make some changes. It's a little longer, and a little more detailed. I've put a comment on this to seperate the unedited version and the ...
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A Good Day
**edited. I made some changes and took into account the advice of the people that commented (I've posted a thank you down there so the previous three people's reviews are ...
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Déjà Vu
This is an excerpt - not a complete story. It's not supposed to make complete sense, I just want criticism in literary terms, not so much the plot. I'll tell ...