Nox

I liked the poem but I agree with jennafina and RiverGirl, the last stanza doesn't really fit and kinda ruined the poem abit. If you change it it'll be almost ...

I have read parts one and two; they’re not too bad because you’ve made changes people have suggested. Part three is a little short so here is my review: "his ...

Fight

Eating chocolate :D

No problem :D . When you've posted the next part I'll be happy to read it, just let me know.

Apart from a few mistakes like: “Let me past, or he dies.” which should be "Let me pass, or he dies." I really liked this but I was a little ...

Hey Rachel, Welcome to YWS! I'm Nox and I'm 17 years old. Enjoy the site. :D

I like the shoe (or is it trainers?). Good job, this is better than anythink I come up with.

You're welcome. The Pit and the Pendulum! I've tried looking for that book in my local library and found a really horribly mashed up one. The library can't bother to ...

I'll try this later and post my sword if I manage to follow the instructions right. :D I like the bottom one!

Gal - Very sexy and cute! :D Micah - ANOTHER cute sibling!! I've said alot that I hate pink and this is the only pink top I have.

All adverts are annoying these days. :(

4/10 Really sorry But I don't like Green Day AND I can't really see anything apart from some black and white thing that I can't make out.

I'm not really sure, I only like So Cold and that's it. Have an Ice age - Plaid-Tongued Devils.

I loved it. =D> :D