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Welcome Twilight! 8)

Hello Torsa! Welcome! You're a classical indian dancer? That's great! :D See you around the boards.

Welcome PinsandNeetles and SolisCookies! :D

OK, Bobo's done most of the corrections my review is on the last part: Please change the numbers! "Within 3 days Minnur was a graveyard..." Three not 3, etc, etc. ...

I've read the start and it's pretty good, I don't have time on my hands right now so I'll post my review when I'm done.

Here’s my review: I got out bed , correction I got out of bed . toward the bathroom I think it’s meant to be towards the bathroom . He was ...

I'm baking a cake with Honza today.

:hearts_eyes: Wow I love these so much! My favourites are the Swiss girl, Symbiosis and the oriental lady. Very nicely done! :thumb:

Here is my review: “surrounded be four wooden..” change to ‘by’: “surrounded by four wooden” . “rickety door” Try not to use the same words too often, you can change ...

Tony Blair in my opionion is not an ok guy but that's just me.

OK I see now, it's just I got a little confused.

Very nice! I always imagined Tonks with long pink hair tied in a ponytail but now I see her differently. I'm not a Harry Potter fan but this is good ...

There's too much dialogue and not much description like Sam said. Here is my review: "You don't actually think it’s haunted." This would look better if it was a question: ...

I like Bellatrix Lestrange the best but they're all good. :D