Nox

Boring

Here’s my review: her posture and vacant ness in her eyes . It’s vacantness not vacant ness . My favourite part was the description of Orhilina: Her dusky complexion and ...

This is a great story, I loved it. I can't say more about the dialogue than what J.Haux said. There were 18 members of the group it should be 'eighteen' ...

Welcome to YWS Star Girl. :D

I've read some of this and it's great! I'll add my review when I'm done reading.

I don't have time to read it all but I'll add my review when I'm done. :D

I'll look it up.

I tried reading Eragon and got bored after ten minutes, I didn't bother finishing it.

It was funny but I'm sure nobody speaks like that anymore, well not where I live they don't. It's all nonsense slang.

Bobo: You are not ugly! :D Chevy: You're very pretty and I love your top!

You're welcome Micah! When you've finished part three let me know and I'll review it. More, more more! :P

My real name: Noxious:

Bobby

I'm glad I only reviewed the last part because I think I would have said too much for the beginning. :D

Congratulations everyone! =D>