Nox

I really like the Celtic design crosses and nice shading.

Congratulations to your brother and his wife. He is so cute.

Great work but I'm not sure what those things are across his chest. Large nails?

Diana Wynne Jones, I love all her books and have every single one in my bookshelf.

This is great though you should finish the colouring and show us. :D

Who doesn't love a 99? :D

Glass

For charcter names I usually pick my friends names and then alter them or join them with other peoples names. For story ideas try to use things you like or ...

Marching_Gurl: Aww that puppy is so cute. Doe: You're sister looks cute under all that blossom and I think I remember it snowing in Febuary. Khayriyyah: I was going to ...

It would look better with more colour or maybe if there was another character or so. Nice job though.

The hand and the twingling swirl things are my favourite, I can't quite see the ring so much.

Isn't it his 'words' and not his 'writing'?

I really liked how you described how the daimon appeared. Then came the twinkling swirls that gave off a refulgent light, the silver was shapeless until the paws of a ...

*slap her head* I was thinking of something else when I wrote that post.

This was really short and for a young reader and I enjoyed reading it. Good job.