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Re: A Little Fantasy Chapter 1: A New Beginning
It was a good start... I liked but i really wish i knew what the age of the people were. It would give me a better idea of what they ...
Fri Nov 27, 2009 6:33 am -
Re: Falling Apart /Chapter 1/ (Official)
Its amazingly funny and cute. I loved it. But you shouldn't go into the romance part so early into the story. Maybe you could have Ryan end up tricking her ...
Fri Nov 27, 2009 6:10 am -
Re: Whenever Forever Will Be - Chapter One (Part 1)
I liked it a lot! It was really good. I hope i get to read more of it...
Fri Nov 27, 2009 5:58 am