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This was good! But you had a error that really bugged me. It wasn't too bad but, i don't know, it just got to me. Grammar: "He has just shifted ...

I liked it. Its good to have your warm ups. And this is a good beging. If you ask me, Don't listen to Rena0421 up there and do what you ...

This is kinda confusing. You have two many subject starters and you can combined most of your sentences. Here are some Notes that I took in my writing class: Things ...

Keep going! Please I want to read more. Omg! I loved it! You had so errors but you could make them out.If you do write more please, please PM me.

Wow this is really good! I was hoping i could read more but it ended. =( If you put any more of the story up, PM me!

Thanx! That makes it easier.

It was a good start... I liked but i really wish i knew what the age of the people were. It would give me a better idea of what they ...

Its amazingly funny and cute. I loved it. But you shouldn't go into the romance part so early into the story. Maybe you could have Ryan end up tricking her ...

I liked it a lot! It was really good. I hope i get to read more of it...

This is a short kissing scene in one of my books. Hope you enjoy! ------------------- “No. Please wait,” she called after him. He froze instantly as the first word came ...

I loved the poem! And a poem can be in any format you want it to be. Poetry is of feeling, not of grammatical error. Forestqueen808, If you think that ...

Across this barren land of woe She cries out to her unforgiving foe To whom do her cries seek? The man in which is her lovers peak He hears her, ...

I fall and fall hard And he can not stop me My bones crack and shatter For I have been battered Thoughts rise to surface And finally I realize He ...

It won't effect me No it won't even scratch the surface They laugh and Scheme And it will mean nothing to me Ha! I will laugh with you Hysteria may ...

Watchful waiting, eyes intense You watch me through your golden fence You stand at the sight you're seeing Call out to my heart now bleeding I see you, in yet ...