NonFictionIdot

I loved this poem. It kinda confused me because i thought u were talking about stars but in the end it was a Christmas tree. Very tricky if you ask ...

I wasn't thinking of gay rights when i was reading this either. But i loved the poem,maybe not reason behind it but i still liked it! Keep going!

Oh, how I long for your never ending warmth. Your arms encircling my cold, aching body. My eyes close at the sense of your unforgotten touch! And your mind touching ...

I love it! You are an amazing writer! I hope to read more of your writings! My favorite line would have to be: I may have a friend who will ...

I want to read more! No far! Put more up on the website!

This was really well written! Its so true and i love how you make the reader realize it! My favorite line would have to be: Chained to the depression and ...

This is a great poem! I love how your mother is your blessing and how you have Learned to appreciate it. Amazingly written!

Oh my god! I loved it! This poem hit me hard... And made me want to cry. You're gifted and never, ever let any one tell you other wise! Keep ...

This is an amazing piece! I loved it! And i really love your title!

Please, you must keep going. Its like not being able to finish a book. It sooooo irritating! I love this story and now you leave me wanting more!

I loved it! Don't Change a thing to it!!! I'm serious! Don't! Hope you keep going!

I know its a bit repetative, but this is what i have. -------------- One day I will rise, And other I will fall! Like every Great Nation, I'll be like ...

Oh GOD! I fell in love with this story!!! Keep going PLEASE!

I loved it but as Forestqueen said you are moving a little too fast. Slow down and show us what was supposed to be the relationship.

Keep writing, i would love to see what happens next!