Nolan

The beauty of a thousand suns Shines on their face. Not one person runs, Oh, 'tis no race. All of the radiant light Coming from the sky, Takes away the ...

Very refreshing. I enjoyed it thoroughly. :D Just, next time, don't try to explain yourself as much to the readers. In fact, don't try to explain yourself at all. What ...

Generally, this was a great poem, there're just a few things you're missing: Don't repeat yourself so much, it's quite distracting. Use more vivid and descriptive words rather than short, ...

This is a great piece, just, next time, make sure you complete the idea a little bit more. Don't be quite so open-ended. :D

Do you ever feel Like you're the only person alive Caught in a lie That you can't trap That just goes on and on And on and on for the ...

That was wonderful. :D