Nolan

they'd probably make him drink some whiskey to dull the pain, reach into the hole (hands, fork, tongs, forceps, pretty much whatever they had) and pull the bullet out, then ...

wow. i really like this whole series. it's amazing.

rofl. i know. i was very...frustrated when i wrote this, you could say. :) i don't like it, personally, and, if i could, i'd delete it. :}

i know what you mean. being a st. louisan and american myself, i find it a great blow to our nation that one of our largest companies, which is an ...

The parasite in my brain Creeps closer and closer. It's driving me insane, And my mind boils over. Into the pot that is my soul: Growing large, getting old. Becoming ...

i really liked this. it was powerful, elegant, and poetic. i don't really have time to critique it right now, but, when i do, i'm coming back. great job. :D

okay, thanks. i'll work all of it in as soon as i get a chance. :D again, thank you.

i liked this. very elegant. it needs to be punctuated, though: Whispers and song lyrics sound so much better than the words i put down when i wrote you that ...

Bravo! This was great. the only problem that i really had with it was the erratic rhyming, and the rhythm was a little off. other than that, it was great. ...

mmm. thanks. this was actually a persuasive philosophical essay for my honors english class.

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m m m. i liked this. it was strangely poetic, without quite painting a picture. it kind of describes how every writer feels at one point or another. bravo! :D

yummy. i like this. puntuation and stuff's not great, though. (punctuation fixed below) Dearest reader, take solace in my words; Floodgates now open my thoughts unheard. To you I dedicate ...

bravo. i like this, a lot. it was poetic, but not quite a poem; more of an expression of one's desires and lusts, phrased in a poetic style. try separating ...

Can you feel the currents blowing On top of the world? Motionless waves rolling, And a wrath unfurled. When the world falls in, And no one knows how, Will you ...