Nolan

rofl. i really, really like this; it's hilarious, in a morbid, coming only from knowing a multitude of gay men way. the only things that bothered me were that a)no ...

This is intended to be the first part in a series of short stories. :D _____________________________________________ “Ummm...Daddy?” asked the little boy, making a low whistling noise as he blew h

First off, before you post you should have two reviews done. :D Secondly, I really like this poem. It's kind of akin to some of the poems i write. The ...

rofl. I loved this. I was actually playing guitar when I read this, and I unconciously turned it into a little song. :D

Wow. This was beautiful. If someone told me that if you did something hard enough your sorrows couldn't break through I'd believe it. This one little line wields huge power. ...

I'm sorry, but I think we all just got stupider That may seem a little harsh, but this was ...horrendous. On top of the poor plot, there was little correlation, ...

Gaze into a broken heart; Do you still feel so smart? Stabbed with a steel dart, Suffering goes off the chart. Leave with this poor soul, Of your hatred it ...

to be honest, i didn't really read it. i just wanted to tell you to be careful about writing this. this, already, is probably copyright/trademark infringement, just for using the ...

The mirror is broken, The lines are gone. The heart's are smokin', And we are wrong. The Sun is not there, The Moon won't shine. Nobody is everywhere, I wish ...

this was a nice thought, but wasn't expressed very well. other than a few punctuation and grammar errors, i didn't find any major mechanical errors except for a couple tense ...

Oh, the water burned On that sunny night. The fire churned In that dark daylight. The big men shrieked, And the old women ran. The little elephants freaked, And big ...

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● I play, to varying degrees of skill, six instruments: guitar, piano, bass, drums, sax, and harmonica. ● When I’m older I either want to be a rockstar writer peace ...

rofl. good point, i didn't really take that into account. -bows in deference. :D

man, this story is enrapturing! i really do like it. the only thing that made me slightly uncomfortable was how quickly jonas submitted to thomas and niki, it seems like ...