Nitier

It really depends on how soon you want it introduced, like the others have said. In one of my novels, I didn't show that there was magic until a few ...

Meh, anything's alright so long as you mix it up and make it your own. If you use elves or dwarves, just make them different. Or you could make up ...

Ok, so here's another story. :D Comments are appreciated! The title is still pending, so if you have any suggestions, let me know. The collision made no sound. It didn’t ...

Thunder clapped and lightning bellowed I've never seen "bellowed" used to describe lightning. . This was the night of the council of Elders. "A storm is brewing in the east, ...

I recognize your name and avatar. Are you on YWO? Anyway, welcome ^^ yeah, I am. What's your name on there? I'm Majyk. I think I critiqued a poem of ...

I recognize your name and avatar. Are you on YWO? Anyway, welcome ^^ yeah, I am. What's your name on there? I'm Majyk. I think I critiqued a poem of ...

I recognize your name and avatar. Are you on YWO? Anyway, welcome ^^

So far, nothing peculiar had happened, which in itself was, well, peculiar. That's a bit confusing for an opening line. Since I can't suggest a way to fix it, I ...

So far, nothing peculiar had happened, which in itself was, well, peculiar. That's a bit confusing for an opening line. Since I can't suggest a way to fix it, I ...

Ah, thanks for the welcome. I was beginning to think I'd done something wrong to only get one person xD. Don't worry, I don't usually do small comments on stories ...

Prologue When the child was born, it already knew how to use its powers. It had been born into an average middle class I always thought that was one word ...

Prologue When the child was born, it already knew how to use its powers. It had been born into an average middle class I always thought that was one word ...

Whispers flooding through the walls like fire burning down the forest trees. People running away from something like water flowing over everything in it's path. Who is coming? And why? ...

Thanks. Yeah, lots of stuff here. I need to spend some time looking around I think :p

Gosh I hate writing intros xD. Anyway, I'm Nitier, as you can obviously see. I'm also a member on TW and YWO, but anyone from there would know me by ...