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Yay! But its too late. :P

I come to a stop and realise I had run into a section of the ship that I did not recognise. "Where am I?" I think aloud. Gawd I'm talking ...

I don't get it, what are you trying to say in your poem? Are you angry about something or are you just depressed because it sounds like something I might ...

Did you hate Of Mice and Men or The Pearl. If you haven't read The Pearl just try it out, if you still don't like it try another author.

What a weird computer you have. :? Emily woke up to the sound of gunshots. Startled, she sat up, her eyes wide with -- With what? Wake up, Eat breakfast ...

I'd have to agree with Amice, I did suggest doing research into the Victorian Era so then it'll be easier to write. "Whots the matter, young man?....I'm sure she'll be ...

Oh, I can't stand this any more! Thought Emily desperately, pulling her shawl around her and quickly running up the steep steps to the door. -- Oh, I can't stand ...

If you write about the Victorian Era, you should do a little research into the things you write about. The Victorians had unfair treatment but I don't think Emily would ...

"Allow me, to escort you to dinner. Oh, and my name is John" -- The gentleman should introduce himself first and he should call her 'Miss' because people were meant ...

Wow, this is really good. I love his robe!

I love them, they look adorable.

I love the blend Emma. :D

Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potato to Joe because he was imaging pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe d pickles so Ann ...

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Brian. This is just something I'm practising for an English assignment and it still needs a little more work into it.

Congrats!