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Thanks, I like your one too.

Thanks for reading and commenting, I'm currently editting this part and it isn't all of chapter one. I might carry on with the story but I'll have to work into ...

Star Wars Soundtrack

Welcome Jessie, I'm Niobe. :D

Areida -- You're beautiful and I love the dress.

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I think I'll be the one to point out the mispellings. negotiating their way to the front -- I don't think 'negotiating' is the right word here, how about 'making' ...

Normal? I don't know about that, nobody is normal because normal can vary right? I like visiting museums and castles, does that make me an outcast because a lot of ...

Thanks Bobo, I'll try it out.

They -- Jem.

Thank you, I thought I was the only one to be hypnotized by the second one, looks like I'm not alone. Emma it wasn't very hard. :)

Welcome to the site. :D

:P I had a firend who had the same problem and she actually looks better now that her hair has grown back. Once your hair grows you'll feel better I'm ...

:D Arvy -- I used Paint Shop for these, I can never use Photoshop even with tutorials.