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Re: Logical Love
WoW I really like this!!!!! It is completely true. I hate all those romantic books that are always saying ' I love you with all of my heart' and crap ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Inside her shell
yer i get what you mean, but I kinda wanted to stress it............. thanx
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Inside her shell
Expressing oneself is a necessity in this life. So when she was sent to her high school (where uniform had to be perfect and hair had to be un-dyed and ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Forget
I really like the idea of this and you really took it head on and sold it, although some of the wording could be better. You gotta be careful playing ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: Rewriting the past
WOW very beautiful the way you shaped the words and sentences well done! I love how I didn't rhyme. You can't do anything more creative than right a beautiful, flowing, ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: The Clockwork Hand
WOW this is a really good start! I love the setting.... The one thing I can contribute, and other people have probably said this in their reviews, is watch your ...
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: The Clockwork Hand
WOW this is a really good start! I love the setting.... The one thing I can contribute, and other people have probably said this in their reviews, is watch your ...
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: I Dreamt Of A Land
-----I Dreamt of a land... Aerrow was cursed. Eternally, is there was such a thing as forever He had loved. That was wrong in the dark and warped life he ...
Feb 13, 2011
