Nikachu

Thanks for the review babe! I'll work on more dialogue and plot in the next couple chapters!

Thanks for the review babe! I might add a sentence or two setting up the conflict but expect more in the future!

Thanks for the review! And yeah that was a typo...oops haha I'll fix that! More will be coming and it will (hopefully) introduce more of the story. I'm really excited!!

Thanks for the review! And yeah that's a good point about the character development. I guess I wanted to keep the first chapter short so I don't lose reader's attention. ...