Nightshade

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Hi Kitty, your last review was wonderful, so I would love it if you would look at my latest poem. I'm particularly interested in how you interpret it and how ...

Contains profanity. Unedited NaPo. Thoughts, impressions, interpretations, criticisms and all of the like would be greatly appreciated. This will be my last non-new work I post on here, I promise ...

Hello there, Lumisir. Let's begin :) This is a mess. A wondrous, beautiful mess, but a mess all the same. You frequently give up coherency and development for the sake ...

Very slightly edited NaPo piece " Michael Bronson '92 " The words are rough under my fingertips, splintered gashes carved into my bench. I think he must have been here ...

Mach 3 Lights flashing burning supersonic retinas engorged from cries coming a little too quick for the ears to hear. If I'd known how tight the rope would sit round ...

I demand an update. I suppose that is reasonable. He's just a wee lad, but I like him. The Ultimatum Tonight you have to love me. If you don't, all ...

Kaitlin 's and my entry for the poetry pairs contest. I used to think we’d reach heaven when we died. I trusted the stained-glass myths about cathedrals and golden clouds ...

I'm a sucker for short poems, and therefore adored this: cemeteries torn into my hands like... like cold grim smiles and walking for miles and trying to remember what everything ...

In the Garden Do you remember the night the wolves came to steal the babies we'd been growing in the backyard? Or how the circles we spun with our burning ...

Lovely. More on this later.

This has some naughty language. You've been warned. Obedience Training I told my dog to sit. He stuck his tongue out and said, "No." "Why not?" I asked. "Well," he ...

It weirds me out that you seem to be putting out some of your best stuff during NaPo. Crazy girl.

Lovely as always. My personal favorite: I wonder sometimes how many lions must have lain behind the mirage of your eyes

I've never read anything of yours before, but this is fantastic. All of it.