Nightshade

Hi Lexi, you've set a nice scene here, but I think there's a fair amount you can do to make this more effective. Let's see what we can pick out. ...

Hi Kyllorac, would you be willing to take a look at my newest poem, Airbag ? Any help on it would be greatly appreciated. Thank you so much.

Hi Sierra, I would love a review on my latest poem, Airbag . Thanks!

You say you frequent a place where cannonballs bounce off angels' breasts and explode on your tongue. So take a moment and lick between my shoulderblades. Tell me, is the ...

There's a place under my eyelids where strangers like to drive their cars. When I was ten, I decided that their headlights were too bright and when I saw flashes ...

White thread spun through your hair tangles between my fingers and ties knots around my tongue. I gag, "love, kiss, touch" to your earrings, your ears are reserved for needles ...

I wasn't a big fan of this, although there was one spark I found intriguing. My main issue was that everything was so blunt that it lost any semblance of ...

Hi Octave. I rarely venture out of the poetry forums, so please forgive me for skipping over the nitpicks and shredding and criticism in general. I just don't have anything ...

I’ve spent the last four years with sand under my tongue and waves breaking in my ears. I’d say it was worth it if I could look you in the ...

I just looked up Digging. It's a fantastic poem. I haven't read a huge amount of poetry, but I've been reading more and more lately. Russell Edson is my favorite ...

I am the water in the walls, seeping through the cracks and falling into your bed. I'm too cold, you say, and take your blankets to the couch. While you're ...

This poem burns slowly. After my first read-through, this was an "awwwww" poem. Then after second and third and fourth and fifth read-throughs I started noticing the conflict in what ...

Hi Kagi, would you be willing to look at my latest poem? Here's the link: Less than or equal at nineteen Thank you so much :)

13. I sold my faith to the preacher for a matchbook and a can of worms. He gave me a little pat on the back and said, "Only you can ...

Persy, it is wonderful to see you playing with your style, and you've done it very well. This type of poetry is hardly my specialty, so we'll see how much ...