Nightshade

Hi, would you be willing to review my latest poem? Thanks!

Thank you for the reviews everyone. I've done some editing that I hope filled in at least a few of the holes. If any of you see something that I ...

This made me very very happy. You've done a great job of conveying one of the most awkwardly joyful experiences most people have, and the short length of the piece ...

This is the first part in a series. Part Two Part Three Part Four All parts are meant to be in the same voice, but not necessarily chronological. I don't ...

Hi Skins, I know poetry isn't your thing, but I've been impressed with your poetry reviews anyways :) Would you be willing to look at one of my poems? Thanks!

Hi, would you be willing to check out one of my poems? Here's a link: Thank you so much.

You use some nice language here, but the content didn't do a ton for me. I ended up feeling like this was a collection of sketches built around an idea, ...

I saw you in a golden street glare, tripping in your leather boots, tears sparkling on your flushed cheeks. They would have been a plain red, had it not been ...

This might be the most intriguing poem I've seen you put out. The poem built nicely on the "body is a cage" metaphor (which reminded me almost distractingly of the ...

I really liked the tone of this piece. It's very different from the style that you usually write with. It actually reminded me of the story-driven autobiographies that were popular ...

Just because someone spanks their child doesn't mean they are being violent with them. Spanking is a violent act. It's using physical force to someone to cause pain and in ...

What kind of toddlers and young children do you know that extrapolate that information? Kids don't draw philosophical conclusions like that out of a spanking. Adults draw those philosophical conclusio

First off, you're a very solid writer. You have a strong vocabulary and your sentence structure is excellent. This has all been said by most of the other reviewers though, ...

Hi Silent, I would love a review on my latest poem. Here's a link: Thanks!

This poem was very ok for me. I found a lot of this relatable, but it didn't have a lot of imagery or interesting perspective. There were glimmers of powerful ...