Nightshade

I read the first Idolatry, and you have a really great idea here. I would review that one also, but you've done a ton of great work on it, and ...

Hey Kaitlin :) I tend to agree with what you've written in your spoiler. You have some really nice stuff here, but it needs some cleaning up. I'll jump right ...

This is easily my favorite poem of yours. Your imagery and emotion are in perfect balance, and every line is carefully placed and meaningful. I loved your the style of ...

Aurora, you seem to be changing how you describe prison to suit your purpose. In the course of a single post you go from calling prison "a life of free ...

Aurora, you seem to be changing how you describe prison to suit your purpose. In the course of a single post you go from calling prison "a life of free ...

This is one of my favorites of yours. You've started to work in some emotion to mix with your imagery, and it works really nicely. Actually, my main criticism is ...

I have to disagree with the previous reviewers on grammar and structure. The ideas behind a poem form its core, but the presentation of the piece is tremendously important in ...

Hi, would you be willing to review one of my poems? Here's a link: It's 18+, so if you're not interested, that's completely understandable. Thanks!

Hey Kamas, I've decided to give you an annoyingly late review :) Reading this, I ended up feeling very similar to what Elinor described.The poem seemed like a giant conglomeration ...

Rated 18+ for language, sexuality, and alcohol references This the second part in a series. Part One Part Three Part Four All parts are meant to be in the same ...

You have some really nice sparks of insight and creativity here, but right now some flaws are distracting a lot of attention from them. You built this on an interesting ...

Really great work, lass. I think you've set a new standard for yourself here :) Lumi has given you a lot of great stuff, so I'm only going to hit ...

Hi, could you review a poem for me? Thanks!

Hi Lumi :) The ideas and words you lay out here are pretty incredible. You show a tremendous amount of insight and ability with your words. However, I felt a ...

It's great to see you experimenting with your style. There are some strong elements in here and some that need to be reworked and built upon. That's to be expected ...