Nightshade

Hi MMM, I really enjoyed this. You've chosen your words with enough care and injected the piece with enough individuality that I had a terrible time find real criticisms to ...

Hey Persy, I'm finally here for the review :) This might be my favorite of yours. I feel like I've said that to you quite a few times recently, which ...

The first time I read through this I didn't really like it. After a couple more read-throughs I appreciate the intricacies of the piece much more, but there are still ...

I loved this. You stick with one idea through the entire piece and really develop it so it reaches it's full potential as far as impact. The style is also ...

Hi silented. Here to review "Said disease" :) I'm not sure exactly how I feel about the first stanza. The image you create is so bizarre and complex that the ...

Hey Kaitlin. I told you I would get around to this someday :D I rarely venture out of the poetry forums, so forgive me if this review isn't quite up ...

This is the fourth and final part in a series. Part One Part Two Part Three All parts are meant to be in the same voice, but not necessarily chronological. ...

Granted; now you are constantly mauled by women (causing severe damage) I wish I had candy.

I'm really impressed with your improvement since "Bitten". You have some really nice elements in here, but there's a lot you can do to bring those elements out more effectively. ...

This whole debate is a very murky thing to delve into. Problems are almost entirely based on perspective, so the meaning of the question isn't the same from person to ...

Great work, Kafka :)

Hi bookworm, Eloquent Dragon has given you a ton of good nitpicks, so I'll just throw some general impressions your way. The first paragraph seems very abrupt and underdeveloped. I ...

Warrior stole Persy XD That one would've been easy. Besides what's obvious in your profile picture, I imagine you being medium height (5'6"ish) with brown eyes.

Really great job, Persy. I can't believe how much you improved this from the piece you showed me. I have a couple suggestions, but they are all nitpicks. cancerous ghosts ...

This is the third part in a series. Part One Part Two Part Four All parts are meant to be in the same voice, but not necessarily chronological. Turn on ...