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Re: The Assassination: Part 1
Ok, this was good, but there are a few things you need to fix. I'll bold the sections The Assassination: Part 1 9pm. He was already an hour late. Alex ...
Thu Jan 03, 2008 7:35 pm -
Re: Hidden by Darkness (title change?)
Personally I like it, but giving a bit more background would be perferred. The only other thing is that it gets a bit confusing during the fight scene. Other than ...
Wed Jan 02, 2008 10:13 pm