NightsDreamer2277

I write because it's my words that I can't say. In a way, my thoughts become my stories and the things I've never said that I wish I could become ...

Wow. That was an unexpected ending, but this story is well done. You incorperate many aspects of fear and thought that make your reader think and the details put me ...

(Alright, this is the continuation of Thicker than water since it seemed like people enjoyed the first. There is a third part, but I'm still working on it.)) No Amount ...

Your cover art is incredible! I love the colors you chose as well as the way its drawn. Unfortunately my computer is too slow to load the others pages, but ...

This story is rather confusing. In the beginning you switch between perspectives a lot, and without defining marks, it leaves the reader wondering if it is a mistake. It does ...

Thank you for the review. This was written for school and supposed to be less than two pages. As you can see, I failed miserably at that aspect. However, I ...

This was a very interesting part to read. You capture Sakura's obsession with Sasuke's opinion of her well. However, I didn't really see anything about this plot that made it ...

Wow. Your title interested me because "Click, Click, Boom" is an inside thing among my friends. It was very well written, and I didn't find any obvious errors in it. ...

Ok, this is a very interesting story. I like the basics of the storyline but there are a few problems that I noticed as well. First, you need to work ...

This was well written. I enjoyed the way you portray the master and his pupil as well as the religious conflict in the area. There were no obvious grammer mistakes ...

Thicker than Water By Jazz Anzara ((Author's Note: This story is shorter than I am used to writing, but I will be greatful for any and all comments. I have ...

Has anyone ever taken part in the Scholastic contests?

You're story is well done. Prisoner of War's views are difficult to do in fair justice and you have done an excellent job with that. It has no obvious grammatical ...

When stuck for names I usuallly ask my friends and such what they think would be good ideas. It also helps if you have fun creating your own names from ...

I really like this story, though I know I'm late on posting. It has a neat dramatic flair without being too unrealistic. Your writing is wonderful to read, and I ...