'Ello 'ello. Just a few things you should know: my strength is characters and dialogue and this tends to be the thing I critique most as well as the over all feel of the piece and the amount of sense it makes. I do however fail at grammar, its my greatest weakness and I try my best to fix it !! So thats normally what I like to be critiqued on as well as over all feel of the piece or things that werent clear. Thanks if you took the time to read this xD <3
