Nightmares

Erg, thank you. And yes, my grammar is terrible. I cannot grasp the concept of it at all, so forgive me on that front >..< and yes I shall write ...

'Ello, 'ello. Firstly praise is in order. This is gorgeous, I really like the fierce look on his face! He looks ready for battle! Ok so here are the things ...

Hello thar', This is just something I have recently come back to and decided to turn into a succession of short stories. Let me know what you think! Any pointers ...

Asim, Eric, Danny, Dan, Cody, Lloyd, James, Hamish. At the moment thats all I can think of, I think a name that could be used either for a boy or ...

I must say that doesn't leave much to the imagination. It simply sounds like a story about a fighter in the desert. I should hope there is prehaps more to ...

Dear Nightmares, Stop messing with the fabric of death, no one is capable of true immortality! Kill the girl or I will be forced to take your life to sustain ...

"Summon Mort from his Grim Reaping duties and demand to be returned home, I don't have time to be wondering around the desert aimlessly!" - Miss. What would your character ...

I'm one of those people who have conversations in their head. So one of my stories was inspired by one such incident and I found myself wondering who was talking ...

If you're interested in seeing how others have gone about this kinda concept: Sergei Lukyanenk's The Night Watch Trilogy is brilliant !!!

I tend to do a bit of both but my stories tend to be more character orientated. So the characters normally come first with their own stories attached. It can ...

Oh dear, I must say I'm a little green atm (in a good way and no not with jealousy) remember to put a rating, please. I was kind of shocked ...

O.O I'm not going to even critique it. I loved it and really hope you do add more to this one. The flow is brilliant and I already love Mimi

Atom by Steve Aylett. . . for what I do believe must now be the 15th time. Must read for all psychos and soon to be psychos out there. And ...

Greetings thar, I agree with the previous posted comment that the paragraphs are far too huge. All the description also seemed to get confused as well, make sure you have ...

'Ello 'ello, I do oh so like this piece !!! And I know you said no nitpicks but I just have to comment ! I love your dialogue and writing ...