Nightlyowl

Ok, I just have a few comments. “Hey mum.” Jenny picked up the phone. The person who called Jenny was her mum. You don't have to say that because when ...

Wow that's really good. Though I find that you use the word 'nor', in 2007 I don't think people would actually use that word in sentences anymore, but it gives ...

I liked it a lot. I understand where Audy is coming from with the grammatical errors, and the thing about the pencil can't feel frustration, but I think that if ...