Nightlyowl

I'd like to know what actually happens to the girl and what exactly happened to her too. But unfortunitly I never thought of the rest haha. You can go to ...

Thank you. I'm glad you all liked it.

I suppose pass could work there. I'll try it out. I didn't like passed but pass does seem to fit better. Thank you, and I'm glad you liked it.

Thank you so much. I'm glad you kept on reading it. Haha. Yea I'll cleairfy that house/shed thing, when I was writing it I just didn't want to keep saying ...

Ok, I'll keep that in mind, though I didn't actually put much thought into in the first place since it just came to me and was scribbled on the back ...

Thank you both so much. I did the corrections, well some of them I tried to do the Passed to Pass but it didn't sound right so I'm leaving it ...

Just an fyi for those who've read the Motel 66 chapters 1-3, this has nothing to do with that story, this was just something that came to me while I ...

The moan of the car heater is comforting even if it brings back fresh memories of pain and suffering. I don’t like cars anymore… or vehicles in general. I don’t ...

Hi there. First I want to say that I like it very much and can't wait to read the next chapter. It was as I stepped into the dangerous darkness ...

Thank you I'd be happy to see your comments on the next ones.

Thank you, and I'll keep that in mind. I actualy have chapters 2 and 3 out already. Just posted them as a matter of fact.

Wow... that was great... depressing but great. The only thing I have to say about it is that you repeated a word: The reaction was only two cars cars ahead ...

Chapter 3: Reni had to think quickly, the black and white was in her peripheral vision now, and the siblings were still on the open road. The tool shed was ...

Chapter 2: The siblings just stood there, gawking at the figure in the shadows. Tyler was terrified, but he held himself up straight, the façade of a warrior. Moonlight shone ...

I loved it, what made it all the more heart breaking, was the fact that I was listening to a song that fit this poem. I really do love it, ...