Nightlyowl

That was pretty good, I liked it and want to know what happens to him, does her father kill him? The only thing I would say, is this, every time ...

I really loved this, I think its perfect the way it is. I can't believe its this good as a rough draft, I mean when I write a poem I ...

Thank you, would you believe this is one of my first poems? Haha. I'm glad you liked it, and it was about suicide.

Sitting in the chair she wondered what people would say if they asked about what happen to the vacuum cleaner. I also think you should re check for run ons. ...

I have some things I need to say To get off of my chest: I am not the best, I am no better than the rest I tried to be ...

Reni’s heart felt like it was on fire, it seemed as though Reni couldn’t get enough air into her contracted lungs. How did this happen? I was in that old ...

This is still being written, so its not finished, and has not been corrected. Chapter 5 and 6 will be next on my list to rewrite. And 1,2, and 3 ...

All right, thank you. I made the corrections, and I do have more. I believe I have up to chapter 3 posted. Chapters 4 and 5 will be coming as ...

See ghost my story. So I do have another point. Haha!

I also really liked this one. I only ahve one question, wasn't Ben the guy who beat her in the Prologe? And saved her in chapter 1? Well anyway there ...

I really liked this story, it was moving and emotional. I can't wait to see how this ends up with the rest of the book. It sounds great.

I'd love to read more of this. I'm wondering what is her reality and wondering if he will have some reason for her discomfort. I watch a lot of shows ...

I'm glad you all like it as much as I do. And nope that's the right word, it means lack of honesty or murals. The poem has two sides to ...

This is actually something my father wrote. I admire him and love his poems, I know I get my writting skills from him. This is something he wrote Hail to ...

Once again did I find myself reflecting on how they could do this without a pilot or any sort of guidance at all. I don't think that sounds right. I ...