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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Delusion

    Wow... this just left me speechless. It was amazing, and I can't wait to hear more from you. My favorite part was We’re wingless in this aimless flight, Armless in ...

    Aug 14, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Motel 66 (chapter 6)

    If anyone is good at Spanish and would like to check the Spanish I put in here, feel free. Also this has only been corrected by me, so any corrections ...

    Jul 10, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Flat World

    Wow that's great! What a picture that paints! The tune reminded me of the "Cat in the Hat" And other such stories. I used to love those and now I ...

    Jul 9, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Coffee

    Haha I like that! It explains my relationship with coffee perfectly. I only smell it, I don't like it. =P Ew it tastes so... blah! Haha. Loved how it didn't ...

    Jul 9, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: Softness of Doves

    I loved this! I really did. I have to go find the others if they are posted. The only thing I thought sounded a bit off was I am panged ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Twist of fate

    I liked this I really did. The only error I saw was this So just before she's leave he reassures that help isn't far But otherwise it's good keep up ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Toy Soldier

    I fixed it up. I do hope this is better.

    Jun 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Toy Soldier

    Standing up tall, Too afraid to fall. You cannot cry, Your life... but a lie. You live on the frontline Lose the mask and finally shine. Your face of stone, ...

    Jun 5, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Hunter's Night

    Wow... I just... I love this. Please post on my wall when you write more! I loved this so much keep up the great work! I'm not good at editing ...

    Jun 5, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Desperate Desires

    I loved this, you really have me interested. Please post on my wall when you have written more I would love to comment and read it. There were only two ...

    Jun 5, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Mysterious Girl in Black 4

    I loved your story, I read it from chapter 1 to 4. It was great. I really liked it. I saw a few typoes and a few grammatical errors, if ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Christmas Tree

    Snow is falling. The wind is calling. Frost hugs the leaves. A blanket for the trees. It is here where we three stand, Wishing we were in the sand. But ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The After

    I loved your poem, it was deep and I could picture it perfectly. The format didn't look like a poem though, but it did have a good rhythm to it ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Fallen

    I changed the gate to gates and wing to wings, as well as conflicting to conflicted, but I liked the ring line so I just changed it so it would ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Fallen

    Among the fallen Lost in time, lost in space Lost without His grace Are those we do not name They earned their fame They picked their lane So there they ...

    Apr 14, 2011


I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, it's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, and that enables you to laugh at life's realities.
— Dr. Seuss