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Re: Delusion
Wow... this just left me speechless. It was amazing, and I can't wait to hear more from you. My favorite part was We’re wingless in this aimless flight, Armless in ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Motel 66 (chapter 6)
If anyone is good at Spanish and would like to check the Spanish I put in here, feel free. Also this has only been corrected by me, so any corrections ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Flat World
Wow that's great! What a picture that paints! The tune reminded me of the "Cat in the Hat" And other such stories. I used to love those and now I ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: Coffee
Haha I like that! It explains my relationship with coffee perfectly. I only smell it, I don't like it. =P Ew it tastes so... blah! Haha. Loved how it didn't ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: Softness of Doves
I loved this! I really did. I have to go find the others if they are posted. The only thing I thought sounded a bit off was I am panged ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Twist of fate
I liked this I really did. The only error I saw was this So just before she's leave he reassures that help isn't far But otherwise it's good keep up ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Toy Soldier
I fixed it up. I do hope this is better.
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Toy Soldier
Standing up tall, Too afraid to fall. You cannot cry, Your life... but a lie. You live on the frontline Lose the mask and finally shine. Your face of stone, ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: The Hunter's Night
Wow... I just... I love this. Please post on my wall when you write more! I loved this so much keep up the great work! I'm not good at editing ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Desperate Desires
I loved this, you really have me interested. Please post on my wall when you have written more I would love to comment and read it. There were only two ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: The Mysterious Girl in Black 4
I loved your story, I read it from chapter 1 to 4. It was great. I really liked it. I saw a few typoes and a few grammatical errors, if ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Christmas Tree
Snow is falling. The wind is calling. Frost hugs the leaves. A blanket for the trees. It is here where we three stand, Wishing we were in the sand. But ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: The After
I loved your poem, it was deep and I could picture it perfectly. The format didn't look like a poem though, but it did have a good rhythm to it ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Fallen
I changed the gate to gates and wing to wings, as well as conflicting to conflicted, but I liked the ring line so I just changed it so it would ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Fallen
Among the fallen Lost in time, lost in space Lost without His grace Are those we do not name They earned their fame They picked their lane So there they ...
Apr 14, 2011
