Nightlyowl

This is supposed to be a dream my character had, so it is short, and it doesn't seem to have a plot, and it does seem to end suddenly and ...

Thank you. I have been actually working on this a whole lot. I wasn't actually planning on making it part of the story I don't think, but I just sat ...

I liked this a lot. It made me think. I believe that the Seas of Gold is kind of like fitting in. And everything you said in the poem made ...

I really liked this, at first I thought it would be like Avatar, but it surprised me and didn't turn out much like that movie at all. I'm impressed. Over ...

I liked this, it was sweet and made me smile. I can agree with that, I'm too young for love. Haha. Anyway. The only thing I saw wrong was in ...

I really like this, its sweet and makes me smile. The only thing I'd say other than the few things from what others said was instead of "anyways" at the ...

A meadow filled with flowers Where the sun shines strong for hours The little girl there, she smiles Running free for endless miles A tree stands center stage The air ...

Oh my god I completly loved that! It was saddening but I do enjoy saddening work. Again its totally relateable and totally didn't sound forced. I can't wait to read ...

I really loved this, it was deep and full of emotion in my opinion. I really did enjoy this, but there was one error I found in your poem. Told ...

Well though I'd love to make it longer, its for a competition with 150 words or less. So that's all that I was able to do. I hope that explains ...

“Sarah, you can’t just walk out of a meeting with Mr. Robertson, what’s he going to think?” Sarah Webster was a thirty year old lawyer and had been for nearly ...

The cage door creaked open on its rusty hinges and I was dragged out by my collar. A large firm hand shoved me along the corridor, dingy light bulbs sputtering ...

I like this, its just enough to make me wanting more. I really like this and am wondering where this is going. I can picture it perfectly, even without a ...

That was really good. I can't wait to read more of it. But I did have to agree and say a little less of the language. Though it does seem ...

I like this very much and would love it if you posted on my profile when you have more. I really like the main character she seems spunky and born ...