Nightlyowl

I really enjoyed this, it was deep and moving and not incredibly long. The only error I could find was this: ...with bare palms cold against and bony knees that ...

I agree with Dante in parts. I think that some parts of the poem were abit confusing and need a little clarity. Though I don't think that they were too ...

I really liked this it was touching and cliché but completely true because lots of times you think that in real life and that's why it seems cliché, because you ...

I really liked this but I agree, you should reread your work. Lighting the way for the little trolls. I still really liked this, it was cute and it made ...

Help me find the light, Please save me from the night. This fight is no longer mine, I’m running out of time. Let me stay here where I lay. Bring ...

Hi, Owl again. I really liked this, it had a deep meaning that I could see and relate to. I hate how everyone needs the new phones and computers, and ...

I thought this was a very touching and moving poem. It really portrays how insecure people are and not just girls. I am not very religious, but this poem made ...

This was beautiful. I absolutly loved it, it was moving and deep. There wasn't much I could say about it that would help make it better since I belive that ...

This is just something I came up with now, it probably needs some tweeks. Feel free to comment. I watch a man and woman walk by They are ageless and ...

This was great. The end makes me think that the figure was an angel and he died right then. I also wonder what happened to give him the plague. I ...

I liked this but I do have some nitpicks. Parts like this: Just remember, hold on tight Squeeze my hand with all your might Let not doubt be in your ...

Hi! Well all in all I loved this, it left me wondering what the hell was gonna happen next. A few quick things though. 1st. is a simple error here... ...

When I see a Willow tree it makes me think of this. Hope you all enjoy. There the Willow stands Across the stretching lands Mossy green against the sky They ...

Hi again, haha. I loved how this was very contrast. Showing both the light and the dark and it makes you wonder what could look like that, until you see ...

Hahah! This was hysterical! I loved it. It was cute and definitly a spoof. You did a great job, I love things when they're spoofed beacause then when you think ...