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Re: Hello, my name is...
Hello, my name is Rebecca and I know everything.... No literally, I know EVERYTHING....
Jan 8, 2013 -
Re: What would your characters do?
"Umm... ok... so you don't want to kill every human on the planet?" -Lily Evergreen What is something you regret doing in your whole life?
Jun 29, 2012 -
Re: Blood Red Skies
Wow I really loved this. It was unquicly written in a way I hadn't seen before. I really liked it especially the song at the end. I loved how you ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: The truth about me
Wow I really loved this. It was moving and I just wnated to stand up and become and activist. To see someone, who is able to write that they're proud ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Set me Free
Hey, I reallyed loved this poem I can definatly relate to this. Its relatable and easy to read. Your wording rolls right off the tongue, and was short and sweet. ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Alice is Waiting
Trees now brown and withered still, As darkness reigns with horrid chill. Hidden away, her body broken, There sleeps Alice never to be woken. Hair of silver, down her back; ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: The Impossible
Hi Owl here, and I'll review your poem. So this piece was good I loved the concept of it, unfortunately there were some errors here and there. I like the ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: Bruises
This was very touching, very moving. It told a story that was heart breaking and hopeful. To think that though she was hurt badly, broken into submission, she's ready to ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Please don't cry
This was beautiful and I loved it. I read it over several times I loved it so much. It was moving and I was able to understand your point without ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Lavender Way
It was nearly two forty-five in the morning when Paige walked home. Her mind was buzzing in a cloudy stupor, most likely from the alcohol her friend had given her, ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: The Singularity
Wow this was amazing, it was perfectly done and the stanzas were even and didn't seemed forced. I really liked it and could understand what it said. It makes me ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Crashing Waves
Glowing fire, hear it roar. Arching glass, hitting shore. Reflecting all your troubled pasts, Take it in, while it lasts. Never staying for too long. Nothing here is ever wrong. ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: My Eyes Smile
Don’t look into My Eyes And see my tears Don’t look at my arms And see my scars Don’t look into my soul And see my pain Just look at ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Into the Darkness
Black crystal skies with pure twinkling lights flickering aqua blue and fiery reds, they were dull yet bright and full of life. Against the ebony blackness, was the mass on ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Lullaby
Wow... simply amazing. I really loved this and could see myself singing this to myself at night or to a child. It was very dark and would most likely make ...
Oct 21, 2011
