NightWriter

Flyingchaos, The writing is really good. It's emotive and touching. However, there are a fair few spelling mistakes there - easily fixed, so no big deal. Also, the whole thing ...

Hey BrokenSkye, You really convey a great feeling through emotive writing. The way you can touch people through your writing is a fantastic ability. There are a few spelling mistakes, ...

Hey Leahweird, I loved it! Really, seriously loved it. It has just the right amount of mystery before the drama comes. It was a little short, if we're picking on ...

Toripoppy, You're really talented. The emotive way in which you write is seriously enthralling. It hooked me in. What I loved was the last line. "I hate them for it". ...

Hey RickBurns, Practice will improve your grammar and punctuation. You just need to watch from slipping from past to present. Stick with one. Segment one, was my favourite, by far. ...

You know what? I love the way you write. Hate what you're writing about, but I love the writing. You have so much character and personality and it's really, really ...

Hey 123456sage, I liked this chapter. There were a few spelling mistakes, 'are' instead of 'were' and that sort of thing. Also, I can see how much you've worked on ...

Hey Iheartbooks, That was cute :) I like how it's simple, quirky and sweet. It's just that: sweet. I don't regularly write poetry, but I read a whole lot, and ...

Hey CreativelyYours, I actually liked the dialogue how it was. I think that's an important part of your writer's voice, how you expel the way your characters talk and I ...

Hey barefootrunner, That was...well, visual ! There is something, however, refreshing about that. I don't stand for cursing and whatever in person, but to read it in a book is ...

Hey WelcomingException, That's a full-on piece of writing. A good full-on, trust me. A couple spelling mistakes; you know, 'shoot' instead of 'shot'. That kind of thing, but nothing major. ...

Hey Aquareed, You have a fantastic character development. Usually younger writers will forget to give their characters a genuine personality, you know? I love how even in this one chapter, ...