NightWriter

Always Dogs. So amazing. Your writing really steals in your readers. Your words are so delicate, so strong. The whole thing flows together with an amazing smoothness. And yet, even ...

What a beautiful piece of writing. This part alone makes me cringe with some kind of isolated feeling: "This was where dreams were shattered. The tangle of limbs, clothes haphazardly ...

What a beautiful piece of writing. This part alone makes me cringe with some kind of isolated feeling: "This was where dreams were shattered. The tangle of limbs, clothes haphazardly ...

Hey CreativelyYours! Again, this is an amazing piece! The only thing that hasn't been pointed out is, I plopped back down in front of him and placed my bottle on ...

Hey Flyingchaos! That was an incredibly emotional piece. I loved it from start to finish! You have a fantastic ability to create pictures with your words and you've done it ...

That was beautiful! Really, really emotive! The descriptive language features you used were very effective. this particular part flowed really well: These are blue words, sad songs that men write ...

You've written this beautifully! It's so soft and gentle, but the words are very powerful. I loved it from the beginning words. Shloka19 has already pointed out the only issues. ...

The Nightmare is written strangely. There is a prologue, and later there will be an epilogue. There is a part one, part two and part three. In each of these ...

That was really helpful StoryWeaver! Thank you so much :) I'll be putting the next part up in the next few minutes, so I'll attempt to attach a link. Thank ...

Yeah this is an incredible piece of work, but as Boogie97 said, the last dialogue is a little vague, so I would change that somehow. From the rest of your ...

A really in-depth piece of work. I was really touched, even though, odds are, it's not real. Still, touching is what is usually aimed for in the creative writing industry, ...

Beautiful! I love the depth of emotion throughout the whole chapter. The length, too, draws me in. I enjoy seeing chapters that are longer than say, 500 words, though those ...

Haha hudz96, that's so true! donations are for those who laze around on the couch. Couch potatos :)

This was good. I've read a few other chapters from Fakebook, and yes, it's really coming together. You've got the storyline down quite well, and your characters are suitably developing. ...

That was sweet. What I liked about it was that it's so heartfelt, so touching and deep. The repitition for the first two paragraphs is a little strange as it ...