NightWriter

ShadowLily that's beautiful! I especially loved the way you flowed your words so effortlessly. It's a nostaligic story, but one that's not sad or depressing. Kind of like a happy ...

Gosh. That was amazing. I love the first line, and how it's repeated as the last. The part: I'm see through. is really good too. I can imagine them talking, ...

This is getting better and better! I CANNOT wait for the next chapter! Before I start rambling on how amazing it was, there was just one thing at the beginning: ...

Mmm, yes, Lampshade Dress is a beautiful phrase. In my perspective, the story is kind of about watching a young girl and thinking of how her future could be so ...

Thanks Rach again! It's true that the narrator could sound similar to the one in Unarmed, but then, I wrote Unarmed at a different time, and plotwise, it's all very ...

I really liked the way in which you write. You have a really super-authentic touch to your words. Something like where your reader can feel exactly what you're writing about. ...

The second picture is phenomenal. It's incredible, amazing. I love everything about it, so well done!! The others are good too, I loved the ones with the peacock. The exposure ...

Thanks Rach, that was helpful! As for the melodramtic-ness, I suppose that's how I write. It's something I delight in - It's my writer's voice, if you like. I know ...

Yeah you have great potential, absolutely! What you need to watch, is when you read over it, continue to ask yourself, "Am I confused?" Cause if you are, we are. ...

There was a young prince, George the Great, Who swore like a bloody first mate. His mother's last hope was to call in the Pope - He gave George an ...

"Fat Beached Whale" haha :) It was actually super good for someone with apparent Writer's Block! Congratulations on your future son :) Your poem was simple, but in a really ...

Oooooh! That was awesome! I really loved it. I loved what it was about, the words it used, the progress through the was all incredible! [Chorus] [Guitar/bass solo (haven't decided)] ...

Haha, I used to do this with my best friend all the time. Our favourite word, I'm pretty sure, was "Tempersir" Which was our teacher when he was mad. Also ...

You're writing about such a heavy topic, which I love. This bit is fantastic: My life's fucked up, I know I need a haircut. Where you carelessly just jump from ...

Yeah I also got a little confused here...Still; it's written really well and there are very little mistakes, so well done. Your dialogue is really good - a bit choppy ...