NightWriter

It’s been too long since they’ve been here. I haven’t felt the blade for longer than I’m supposed to be without it, I know because my cuts are starting to ...

I haven't read any other chapters, but now I want to, trust me! The depth of feeling was great and you pieced it all together so well! I loved the ...

Wow. That's such a full-on thing to write about but for some, I suppose it's so realistic. I love how it's all so blunt and honest, such as this part ...

This was such a powerful piece and a really touching topic to write on. This particular paragraph was epic (if I can say that without being accused of slang): I ...

Hey Leahweird, I loved this piece and agree with Dogs word for word, so really I have nothing more to say. I just wanted to let you know that this ...

You know, this was fantastic: just a couple issues. Firstly, as great and mildly informative as the dialogue is, there is way too much of it to be compared to ...

Great story, but: *white skin-u girl-u girl-u Girl-u heart-u black-u Eyes-u eyes-u meet-u meet-u My future dark* - the music player played. "Why this kolaveri kolaveri kolaveri di," I wore ...

Gosh, that was good. You have a knack for keeping your writing clean and smooth. I like that. I did think, in the middle-ish: “It all makes sense now . ...

Why is this still up if it didn't upload!! So confused? And I want to read the 'actual' one, too. Is that up? Let me know! NightWriter x

I loved it, even though, yeah it was short. I'm interested to see what happens next, but not exactly waiting on the edge of my seat for it. I mean ...

Amazing! Really great writing :) The footnotes are very helpful, I would have been a touch lost without them. Just a question: It saw them and let loose an unheard ...

Sleek, shiny, and squeaky clean, red and white stripes, the gal is a beauty. Soapy suds are draining down the sidewalk concrete. Her coat is wiped down and glistens in ...

Hey again! I loved this, can't wait to see more, actually! The previous comments are yeah, all really valuable, but remember that this is your story :) You don't always ...

Fine. I’m done fighting it. I can’t just shove it back and wait for something to happen. I’m done pretending that you’re just my best friend. Because it’s a lie. ...

Hey catslikebooks2! This was a really enjoyable piece to read! What I loved most was the descriptive writing that really pulls you in. It was definitely an emotive piece with ...