NightWriter

Hey again! This was good! It hadn’t work. If only I had the power to be as cheerful as Lucas, I thought. Then I wouldn’t have to worry about all ...

Hey youngwolf1105, I loved this, and I honestly can't wait to see more! I'm going back to read the first chapter after this :) As if we could’ve toke on ...

Oooh, sorry, it's supposed to be a chapter work! I'll change that :) The rest of the novel is on my portfolio if you want to take a look. Thanks ...

Oooh. You have a good story here. Can't say it's exceedingly original, but good all the same. I like the way you write, it's good for the genre you're in. ...

Hey Abid155, As has been previously said, your 'I's need to be capitalised. Firstly I love what you're writing about. You use big words, small words, simple ones and metaphorical ...

Sorry! This is supposed to be a chapter, I just accidently put it into 'short stories'. You understand, yeah? The Nightmare is written strangely. There is a prologue, and later ...

Hello hello hello! So here we go: Another review on possibly the best murder mystery out there, today! Firstly, I'll just go out and say it: This chapter is long. ...

Hey Sierra, That was good. Really good! Although I felt that the bits in brackets, (You’ve always liked forbidden things) (But when you blink, she’s gone) (Daddy’s drinking again) (You ...

Gosh. It was freezing cold. Snow piled high. Night approached. My twelve-year-old self stood outside the school with the other choristers, gripping noisemakers and lanterns. Parents, teachers and othe

Hey Pencilgirl, I liked this poem, although to me, it looked more like song lyrics than a poem. Stilll; it was enjoyable. It deleted every bad thing from my mind ...

Hey MysticalBlood, That was funny. I'm sorry if it wasn't supposed to be, but I laughed for the most part of it. Which, don't get me wrong, was good. You ...

Hey HorsebackWriter, This was a beautifully written poem. I studied Latin in school, but no, didn't understand a word. Yet there is always something so magical about different languages and ...

Gosh I love the 'shopaholic' series! That aside, I would definitely write most in 'romance'. Not because I'm a mushy teenager with nothing better to do, but because it's interesting ...

I love the imagination that goes into your work! Prologues are always wonderful starters I find, since they inspire me to keep at it, because unlike 'chapter one's, you can ...

You can see your own heart fading, A burden this big won't leave you unbroken. Prepare for the sleepless nights, sir, Because a painful chapter will soon be opened. This ...