NightWriter

Hey 123456sage, I liked this chapter. There were a few spelling mistakes, 'are' instead of 'were' and that sort of thing. Also, I can see how much you've worked on ...

Hey Iheartbooks, That was cute :) I like how it's simple, quirky and sweet. It's just that: sweet. I don't regularly write poetry, but I read a whole lot, and ...

Hey CreativelyYours, I actually liked the dialogue how it was. I think that's an important part of your writer's voice, how you expel the way your characters talk and I ...

Hey barefootrunner, That was...well, visual ! There is something, however, refreshing about that. I don't stand for cursing and whatever in person, but to read it in a book is ...

Hey WelcomingException, That's a full-on piece of writing. A good full-on, trust me. A couple spelling mistakes; you know, 'shoot' instead of 'shot'. That kind of thing, but nothing major. ...

Hey Aquareed, You have a fantastic character development. Usually younger writers will forget to give their characters a genuine personality, you know? I love how even in this one chapter, ...

I didn't expect it to happen this way. Actually, expecting it to happen wasn't even on my agenda, ever. I asked them, yelled at them, screamed and eventually cried. I ...

"We like proper English. That is, we don't substitute "da" for "the," we don't say "im" for "I'm," we don't say "u" for "you," and we expect you to capitalize ...