NightWriter

Adriana, What I really found special in your writer's voice, is the way you can constantly keep a balance with the dialogue and descriptive writing. The last sentence is always ...

Hey Thewritersdream, This piece is really, quite honestly something to be proud of. I enjoyed it, even though I haven't read the previous chapters. A few things I could point ...

Hey Mikko, That's a cute poem. Emotive, deceptive, and quite clearly sad. It made me almost cry there. Stanzas that mention things like, "As she hugged them with her little ...

Hey Mikko, That's a cute poem. Emotive, deceptive, and quite clearly sad. It made me almost cry there. Stanzas that mention things like, "As she hugged them with her little ...

Hey AwesomeSocks, Wow. Haha. It's funny! Like, really funny. I haven't yet read the work it's been designed for, if there is any, but just the sight of it is ...

That's so encouraging Michaeld, thank you! I actually finished reading 'How To Kill A Mockingbird' not too long ago, so my character was probably influenced a little. You're well on ...

You know Michaeld, I love the way you write. It's very different to most poetry. It's short, brisk, heartfelt and kind of quirky. I love the emotive words you use, ...

Flyingchaos, The writing is really good. It's emotive and touching. However, there are a fair few spelling mistakes there - easily fixed, so no big deal. Also, the whole thing ...

Hey BrokenSkye, You really convey a great feeling through emotive writing. The way you can touch people through your writing is a fantastic ability. There are a few spelling mistakes, ...

Thanks Hudz96! It's encouraging that you like it, and thank you for pointing out that there are mistakes. It's always helpful to have other insight on your work. NightWriter x

Hey Leahweird, I loved it! Really, seriously loved it. It has just the right amount of mystery before the drama comes. It was a little short, if we're picking on ...

Toripoppy, You're really talented. The emotive way in which you write is seriously enthralling. It hooked me in. What I loved was the last line. "I hate them for it". ...

I began to teach myself French when I was nine. I think I had this illusion in the back of my mind...You know, like France . I guess it was ...

Hey RickBurns, Practice will improve your grammar and punctuation. You just need to watch from slipping from past to present. Stick with one. Segment one, was my favourite, by far. ...

You know what? I love the way you write. Hate what you're writing about, but I love the writing. You have so much character and personality and it's really, really ...