NightWriter

I was under the impression that marriage was about working through the 'strangling'. He's not my best friend now, but he will be before we get married. Not necessarily 'known-each-other-for-a-million-

That's so exciting! I don't write, really, in Sci-Fi or Fantasy genre, but I know what a big deal that is! Especially for Harper Collins!!!

Anything Bon Iver, Coldplay, Kings of Leon, Birdy, and unoriginally Ed Sheeran :)

Hey WriteWriter, First off, and I'm just saying here, that 'I Love You' is not original. Yeah, we can think ' mine'll be different ' but in all honesty, you ...

Hey KilljoyRetardedFish, Lets get it going: Firstly, and I quote: "Adrian." His name resounds from my lips. He winced, almost like he wanted to be left alone. resounds is present ...

Hey MasterLHeart, This was a really good, strong written piece. A few mistakes though: Yea h I was your somewhat average teen, but I never had a girlfriend for Christmas ...

Hey MidnightSky, One thing: I was scrawled across the sidewalk in a dark alley behind a bowling lane, in the most peculiar and abnormal position; where I was completely immobile ...

Hey Disenchanted! Okay, lets get into it: I got excited when I read the beginning of this sentence - there is just one thing, though: There was a flash of ...

Hey FrozenHeartFcris, Okay, lets get the constructive criticism over with: One Saturday evening, every single detail of my life change. So, this should either be: On Saturday, every single detail ...

Hey Midnight Writer, In this piece, you did show a whole lot of talent. There was a certain distant feel to this, which, I suppose adds to the 'dream' part. ...

Hey VergielynHolmes! This was a really beautiful poem! I'm proud to say that I'm 99% sure that there are no longer any grammatical errors, at all! So really, this is ...

Hey Dogs! Thanks for the review :) I added the second 'terribly' simply to stress the point, rather than 'terribly, awfully' or something. Still, thank you for that. The mystery ...

Thanks for that. Not her dad, but yeah. NightWriter x

Hey KindredSpiritBee, First off, from just reading the first paragraph, you have a really good vocabulary. I like it. Your writing is controlled too, which is good. I apologise now ...

Hey again! This is a good chapter, but as I have said before, rushed. I mean...already this guy she's just met is wanting to kill these girls. Like, personality change, ...