Niebla

Hey Dingobabee, Wow! Before I say anything else, I want to tell you that I loved this. Since it’s obviously quite a long piece and has more parts to it ...

Hey there Lemony, I loved the story -- it was very sad but pretty well written. I have to say, though, that I found everything happened far too abruptly. It ...

Hey AJ, I really, really liked this. It tells a dark story, the pacing is even and flows smoothly, and there are some really unique ideas in this which all ...

Hey Mikko, I have to admit that my first reaction to this poem was a little shock - just because it read so truthfully. I felt a sort of immense ...

Hey Snarkhunter, While I liked this, I have to admit that I didn't get a very definite feeling of this actually being a poem while reading it. It almost just ...

Hey ScarlettWinters, Wow. I love this! It was enchanting, and it really drew me in. I love your writing style more than I can say, and I found that this ...

Hey Celtica, Well - I have to admit that this was not what I expected at all! Considering what the title of this piece was, I'm really not sure what ...

Hey feodora, My first thought when reading this was that although some small parts could probably use a little tweaking, I absolutely loved the way this is written. The writing ...

Hey AJT, Wow. That's all I can say - I love your poetry so much. It always has such a clear and beautiful sense of rhythm, and you create such ...

Hey Qara, As before with the other parts, I love this. It's so engaging, and I really want to read more. I'm really kind of sad that this is the ...

Hey ajt, (Sorry for the lateness of the review.) Anyway, to get to the point -- this is great! It creates such a vivid impression of the place you are ...

Hey SpeedyPencil, I'm torn about whether I truly like this piece or not, to be honest. I like the way you've written it generally, but at the same time, I ...

Hey madimonster, What a sad story. Still, I like the twist you've put into it -- I've read so many stories about girls with leaukemia, but you made this one ...

He casualentries, I like your writing style! However, I did notice quite a few mistakes which I'll try and correct below so that you can change them. 1) Although this ...

Hey Sakshi, I think that this has potential. I caught quite a bit of what could be a really nice poem there, but at the same time, I found a ...