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This sounds a little like the TV show LOST.

Alright here I am reviewing for you. So far this is the best chapter! For me at least. You gave lots of description form the beginning. Which is fantastic! In ...

*I was thinking you could have untied yourself but oh, well. I'm going to post tommorow. Way to much studying to do.* I'll edit the other post. Sorry.

*Thanks, Emi for reminding me that ye=you. I kept trying to remember that. Sorry I've been for so long.* Atila Atila tried staying with Shahara but the man attacking her ...

Venus After the boys fell asleep I heard three other thumps somewhere nearby. Oh man, there was three other people here. Two other thumps sounded from nearby. Or maybe they're ...

I'm sorry! I'll post tomorrow if possible!

* My sincere apologies you guys I haven't been able to get on the computer for awhile. Um, could you guys wait a day to let others post, please? Oh ...

Venus The beautiful animal that slithered through our belongings was now dead, lifeless. I crouched down next to the peculiar creature. The asian girl was mummbling incoherrent syllables, she was ...

Atila Atila climbed out of the wagon, along with the others. These bandits were new to Atila ,she knew most of the gangs. Not that she was in any. Then ...

Venus I stretched out my arms, yawning again. A girl woke me up. Thank goodness she did, people were trying to kill me in my dream. Some kids were rummaging ...

Wait for me! I want in this! Name: Venus Arkensia Age: 12 Weapon: Bola SASS: Singing ability to that puts nearby Lumans or Humans to sleep Fears: Sleeping (Since she ...

Well, Hero's personality (I'm writing as I go here) he is a very needy dog. I mean he loves attention. He is very loyal to Atila, he doesn't like letting ...

Um, is Ayumi going to post? I think I'll pm her. Atila The wagon rolled slowly along the dirt path. The wheels dipped into ruts, giving the wagon an ocean ...

Yeah that detail didn't come to mind. Forgot that. And here's the link for my longbow

*I read the posts, Light Devil. Just keep reminding us to check the DT, and it'll stamp into our heads eventually. I'll put Hero's personality in the DT.* Atila Atila ...