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Re: The Mountain's Mount And The Sea's Sentiments
Oh my God! I absolutely love that old lady. no kidding. I didn't see any problems at all then again I was so into this piece. Man people are getting ...
Nov 4, 2009 -
Re: The Silhouette
I don't know what to make of this. I couldn't notice any grammar or punctuation mistakes. I absolutely love your description! It amazed me. If you're really into this piece ...
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Re: Dried Apricots
Wow. Brilliant. I seriously thought it was going to be silly but then again who would name a poem Dried Apricots if it wasn't actually good.
Nov 3, 2009 -
Re: The Ultimate Game Zone- Prologue
The Ultimate Game Zone is real. Xbox 360 also real. The God of Vidoe Games and Millionaire300 are fictional or at least is unknown to me. Nick101
Nov 3, 2009 -
Re: The Ultimate Game Zone- Prologue
I'm new here. New member new meat. You can slap it around but please don't chop. Prologue “Good morning, Mathew.” A lady with short-cropped hair kissed her son on the ...
Nov 3, 2009 -
Re: Computer Problems
Wow! You had precise detail and everything. I mean if you didn't tell me that this was fictional I would 've believed the whole thing.
Oct 24, 2009 -
Re: Removed #8
Hello tennisprincess than all this summer snow I don't think there is snow in the summer. Overall I love this piece. It had a delightful surprise at the end.
Oct 24, 2009 -
Re: A Whispered Secret - Chatper 1 *Arrival*
Hello Nick101 here reviewing for the first time. here we go “I’m pretty sure. I’ll go by my ticket now, ok?” I said pulling Vanessa by the hand as I ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: New here
Hi I'm Nick101 I love writing and I never had anyone actually critique my writing. Most people just want to be polite but here I have you guys! Yeah! So ...
Oct 23, 2009
