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Re: 1649 (Revised)
Thanks for reading again. Yes, I revised it. That is a good idea for the flashback, unfortunately I have tried it, and it still sounds very out of place. This ...
Jul 26, 2006 -
Re: Lorraine Thellois.
Very disturbing, but nicely written. Everyone has pointed out the errors, so I will just say that it is a great story, even though it creeps me out. Is there ...
Jul 26, 2006 -
Re: The Sunset
Beautiful, and the rhyming was maginificent, except for perhaps the last line. If you could find a more appropriate way to end the poem, it would be perfect. But despite ...
Jul 24, 2006 -
Re: 1649 (Revised)
This story deals with both racism and religious predjudice. All views expressed are solely that of the characters, not me, for I stand in every way against bigotry, and have ...
Jul 23, 2006 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
Have you tried searching for any of his books in the library? Only in mu school library, but I'm going to try ordering the book off of Amazon this weekend, ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
I'd be lucky to find anything by Sean O'Callaghan. I've been searching for To Hell or Barbados for almost a month now, ordered it twice, and got my order cancelled ...
May 9, 2006 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
I'm about 28 pages in The Da Vinci Code (haven't had any time to read recently), and am about to start Septimus Heap: Flyte, the second book in the Septimus ...
May 9, 2006 -
Re: The Plague Driven. Prologue
I really liked this--the plague is an interesting subject, and I think through your choice of words, you give an accurate temper to the story--dark and dank and miserable--I would ...
Apr 25, 2006 -
Re: Lord of Thunder
I'm a freak about Norse mythology too. My favorite story is that of Hoder and Balder. What about you?
Apr 14, 2006 -
Re: What your name means
Is your real name Muir or Murchadh by any chance?
Apr 14, 2006 -
Re: 1994.
I really did love this. There's nothing that needs to be fixed. I don't know what more praise I can offer--I just think it's brilliant.
Apr 14, 2006 -
Re: Lord of Thunder
I've told you before how much I love Vikings, and I thought this poem was brilliant, because it embodies who Thor was--or who the Norse believed him to be. Don't ...
Apr 14, 2006 -
Re: What your name means
Niamh, in Irish mythology, was the Queen of Youth in Tir-Na-nOg. She married Oisin, one of Finn McCumhail's sons, and he was the first mortal to ever enter Tir-Na-nOg. The ...
Apr 14, 2006 -
Re: Where Lies the Ocean
Revision now posted.
Apr 13, 2006 -
Re: My take on an Oscar Winning film:
I don't have photoshop or anything, so that's why it's so sloppy--but I was bored and put it together with paint--whatever it's called. I'm glad someone caught the joke instead ...
Apr 13, 2006
