Niamh

(A merrow is an Irish sea fairy. This poem is inspired by the myth of Jack Dogherty and the merrow.) Swim with the merrow to the deep Men's souls in ...

It wasn't supposed to look realistic, I was just being a jerk to the makers of Brokeback Mountain. I don't know how to do any of that stuff, nor do ...

I can't figure out how to post the picture itself, so just scroll down to where it says April, and look. Wow. I'm going to get myself in trouble. [/url]

Thank you all so much! I'm so excited to see nice comments! Yes, I am taking it further, just slowly, so expect more soon. I hoped that the dialect was ...

Dùbhlan slammed the book shut, and hastily shoved it under her blanket. Behind her door came another knock. "Yes?" she answered exhasperatedly. "Sorry to disturb you," said Burraidh, opening the ...

I love this piece. It is vague, but in a good way--a way that keeps the reader involved, and that is important. My theory is simple: She is afraid of ...

The revision is now posted.

A brilliant work of tragedy. I don't think I can compare anything to this story's greatness.

I couldn't agree more. There was a time once (not here) when a piece of my work, which is still my favorite piece, was verbally torn to shreds. Because I ...

I absolutely LOVE Vikings! I am crazy about Viking history, so I can't wait to read more of this! The grammar could use some work, but other than that, I'll ...

It's a very good start, trench warfare is always an interesting subject. But the thing about trench warfare is the emotions those involved felt. Therefore I think it is critical ...

This is really a brilliant beginning. The only thing I can comment on, is that a few of the sentences are a little choppy, and I would suggest trying to ...

Thank you. I do not like my work to sound as if it was written in the present, and I'm glad I have gotten that across. This is all very ...

No, I'm not going to carry on with it. I like it as it is. I wrote it after I saw a special on the history channel about the Battle ...

This is very interesting. I love that the most ancient of cities are involved. I'm a history dork. Keep going on this story. It's brilliant.