NewDivides

This was a poem I made last year. It was an assignment I had to do, and I am curious to see what others think of this. I forgot what ...

If this was your first attempt, then I would like to read even more of your works! Great job, I love how deep and descriptive everything was. If you can, ...

Very accurate. I love the fact that most of this is true. I agree completely! :P 10. We don't have a penis. I was already laughing after this one. In ...

Yes, I really captured a poetic feeling in this story. Though I was sort of confused at the start, it came together nicely in the end. You write very nice, ...

Author's Note: Thanks for the reviews from the Prologue! I'm happy to see everyone liked it. ^^ These next three chapters will just be about introducing the characters and all ...

I love how you put so much imagery in this. It made your story kind of like a movie! Great job, I was really hooked into to it since the ...

I LOVE the Lost Hero! :D It's a shame you didn't read the Percy Jackson Series, it is one of the best series ever. ^^ Good luck with your book, ...

Thank you for the points! :D I live in the South side, darn.

Hey guys, I was so into making a book that I totally forgot to introduce myself. Hey there! I'm NewDivides. I got that off song, just for those of you ...

I love this! I must say, you write wonderfully. The ending was perfect actually, I saw no changes or anything that could be done to make this story better. Keep ...

Prologue "Death As a dark Shadow Beckons his prey Into the unknown By a soft whisper In the soul." -Cindy Cheney She raced down the stairs, taking two steps at ...